WALT We are learning to use punctuation and vocabulary in our writing

Life of me 

Hello my name is cleo the wasp and right now you can see that i'm 

trying to finish my nest. it's really hard for me, it takes a               

long time to make a nest because i had to move out of my family 

nest. because they think i'm cheeky so they kicked me out because                                                             

they think they are so sophisticated and that's why they kicked me 

out And now you are up to date.    This is where i used to live with

my so called “family”. It looks pretty nice, but inside it is bad like 

really really bad! down stairs it might look really nice and pretty but
up stairs ok ok never mind. Now I'm finished Phew that was 

hard! oh i need to go lay my eggs in a larvae den with the ants. you 

might know the one yeah you know the one right, ok lets go.  I'm on my way, wait what's that??? OMG! is that a wide eyed owl? I 

need to go fast!!!! Where do i go? i know! how about a shrub? that 

seems like a good idea!  i’ll swoop down onto the forest path. I’ll 

try to find a shrub. ok it's right behind me! Ahhh 3 2 1 go!!!!!!! I think i 

can hear it creeping on the ground. crash!! AHHHH what was that? 

swoop. thank goodness it's gone.now that was close, time to 

go to the larvae den! phew, just trying to catch my breath. 

phew! lets go.  Ok I'm here, that owl sure did 

frighten me. i'm going to lay my eggs. It's really hard. 1st i 

have to spray a type of fume that makes all the ants turn to each 

other and fight so i  can lay my eggs in their larvae. 2nd i have to 

lay the eggs in the larvae and i hate it.  it hurts but i must or i don't 

know what will happen to me. ok so i'm going to go and  lay my 

eggs  now bye bye .    

reflection this was really hard for me to get this all done