WALT We are learning to use punctuation and vocabulary in our writing

Life of me 

Hello my name is cleo the wasp and right now you can see that i'm 

trying to finish my nest. it's really hard for me, it takes a               

long time to make a nest because i had to move out of my family 

nest. because they think i'm cheeky so they kicked me out because                                                             

they think they are so sophisticated and that's why they kicked me 

out And now you are up to date.    This is where i used to live with

my so called “family”. It looks pretty nice, but inside it is bad like 

really really bad! down stairs it might look really nice and pretty but
up stairs ok ok never mind. Now I'm finished Phew that was 

hard! oh i need to go lay my eggs in a larvae den with the ants. you 

might know the one yeah you know the one right, ok lets go.  I'm on my way, wait what's that??? OMG! is that a wide eyed owl? I 

need to go fast!!!! Where do i go? i know! how about a shrub? that 

seems like a good idea!  i’ll swoop down onto the forest path. I’ll 

try to find a shrub. ok it's right behind me! Ahhh 3 2 1 go!!!!!!! I think i 

can hear it creeping on the ground. crash!! AHHHH what was that? 

swoop. thank goodness it's gone.now that was close, time to 

go to the larvae den! phew, just trying to catch my breath. 

phew! lets go.  Ok I'm here, that owl sure did 

frighten me. i'm going to lay my eggs. It's really hard. 1st i 

have to spray a type of fume that makes all the ants turn to each 

other and fight so i  can lay my eggs in their larvae. 2nd i have to 

lay the eggs in the larvae and i hate it.  it hurts but i must or i don't 

know what will happen to me. ok so i'm going to go and  lay my 

eggs  now bye bye .    

reflection this was really hard for me to get this all done

The 7 Sisters Of Matariki

WALT WE are learning to think about the myths and legends of Matariki

Long ago there was 8 brothers and the youngest brother was Mitai

is the youngest and the other 7 brother were 

the most handsomest in the hole village. Mitai lived with his koroua and

he had learnt a lot of magic from his koroua one of

the magics that learnt was the turn into a albatross so he could 

spy on his 7 brothers and listen to his brothers conversations

with the help of a god 

Tawhirimatia. Mitai also had a best friend a bird named kiwi they could always

trusted each 

other though thick and thin, but one day a new bird came to the village and

that bird was a kea 

The had been spreading terrible this like Mitai eats Kiwis and that

Mitai HATES birds ect ect

And that was just what he told kiwi but at first kiwi didn’t believe the kea

But then the kea would Not stop so then the kiwi broke and kiwi 

Finally  believed him so then the kiwi stopped being best friends 

with Mitai. the hole village had heared about the rumours they all believed

it so then no one wanted to be friends with Mitai but this koroua. the

brothers went to go for a hunt pig for dinner but then they had heard the

most beautiful singing they ever heard so they wanted to follow and then

with 10,000000000% shock of how beautiful the 8 woman in the world

well that's what they thought so they wanted to marry the 7 woman but

Mitai did not care he did not want to marry the 8 woman named ururangi

so Mitai didn't so ururangi went back to the stars. Mitai was trying to

convince his brothers not to marry them so the agreed

THE END

what did you like about my writing

i felt happy when i was writing this because i could turn it into my own

words and add some more characters to the story