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Friday, November 16, 2018

Three Plump Pigeons

WALT: Retell the story of Koro and the Taniwha.

Koro was a man who loved to eat plump pigeons, but a Taniwha was in his way.  He tricked the Taniwha twice. I don't think the Taniwha will fall for it this time.  Now I'm starting to feel scared for Koro.

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Cleo. I like how your blog post is very colourful and detailed. I also liked how you said what you thought and how you felt. Next time, maybe you could make the font a bit smaller?

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  2. wow cleo i love your blog because it is detail i wish i was you

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